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[fanfic] A Civil Contract

This is a slightly revised version of a story earlier posted to [info]sga_flashfic.

-title- A Civil Contract
-summary- A gen take on one (and a half) of the oldest stock romance plots ever; the words one says may not be those one's listener hears.
-rating/warnings- Um... G to PG, I guess, depending on where you draw the line. Gen, although can be read as pre-anythingyou'dlike. Cultural misunderstandings.
-category- Missing scene set before or during the beginning of "Hide and Seek."
-spoilers- "Rising," "Hide and Seek," mention of a people encountered during the first season.
-characters- Sheppard, Teyla
-disclaimer- If I owned them, I'd treat them right. It's fairly obvious from the passive contrapositive that ~p is true. The First Law of Trade is paraphrased from something the Witchwoman of the Worlds says in CLAMP's Interholic tankoubon #1.
-notes- A bit of personal spackle for the first season, including my assumption as to why everyone in the Pegasus Galaxy can understand each other.


A Civil Contract
by Sophonisba



John Sheppard was examining a corridor of central tower living quarters in a leisurely sort of way, running the water to check for blockages, lying on the beds to test for quality, and peering out the windows with an eye towards choosing a room for himself -- he rather thought that the corridor in question would provide more useful and certainly more comfortable military quarters than the current bivouac next to the public restrooms near the gateroom, in what the anthropologists speculated might once have been a conference room or ballroom -- when he left yet another bedroom and nearly walked right into Teyla Emmagan.

"Sorry about that," he greeted her, remembering at the last moment to use the language that had been in all their heads since they walked through the Stargate, already nearly as familiar to him as English. "Are your people settling in all right?"

"It is... very different," she said. "We are conscious of the debts we owe you, and are grateful."

"Hey, it was our fault in the first place," John said easily. "Properly, we owe you for telling us about the Wraith, and the peanut thing really was our lack of foresight."

Teyla nodded, but John doubted that she was convinced.

"Can I help you with something?" he asked instead.

"I wondered whether there were green growing things in the City," she said. "My people have some reputation as gardeners."

"So far, all we've found have been those very, very long-dead plants. How's Wex doing?"

"He, too, nearly ran me over this morning," she said fondly, "playing with his friends."

"Kids," he smiled. "It's too bad we can't keep bouncing back that easily long enough to really appreciate it.

"I'm glad I ran into you," John went on as they walked down the hall. "There was something I've been wanting to ask you."

Teyla tilted her head slightly in his direction.

"The reasons we came to meet your people still hold. I'd like you -- " he fumbled for a moment, the Weir-had-assured-him-it-wasn't-exactly-Ancient language failing in one-to-one correspondence of idioms -- "to be among my team."

Teyla stopped and looked at him for a long moment. "Who else is in it?"

"I was planning to ask Dr. McKay." He had been turning the idea over since Weir first mentioned the idea of team -- McKay, while undeniably an arrogant SOB, was also undeniably good at what he did, and he'd not only helped John get his people back but given him back flight, without finding either unusual. Besides, John could be sort of an arrogant SOB himself. "And if you agree, I was hoping you'd help give me an idea of who else you could work with."

They walked on in silence, he giving her space to think. As they neared the stairs, she turned to him and nodded.

~*~


Teyla Emmagan had spent a night and a day and a night in the City of the Ancestors, and at least half of her felt that that was enough for a lifetime. The Silver City was majestic, beautiful, and deeply, undeniably, utterly alien.

More than that, their new friends were already more at home in it than she feared her people would ever be. While the people of "Urth," which appeared to be one of their names for the Mother-world of the Ancestors beneath the Begetter Sun, had already adopted the Ring-speech for ease in speaking one to another, they used it to speak of wizardry so arcane that only the Ring's gift allowed Teyla to know what thaumaturgy "meteorology" and "vaccination" and "cybernetics" might be as casually as she would speak of fire-kindlers or weeding a garden, and to confidently predict that in the city they might find, lying about, such simple matters as the ability to transmute materials according to the Gem of Natural Wisdom without the fires of a sun.

They had rescued her people and given them a home among themselves. They had tested her people for the shellfish-sickness against the foods brought from the Mother-earth; tested, moreover, without the need for one person to gingerly taste as others stood by ready to breathe for him or cut into his throat if necessary. They had promised that, as soon as they grew the illnesses from some sort of bread-starter they had brought with them, they would inoculate her people against any common illnesses the Urth-born might unwittingly be carrying.

She had promised the friendship of the Athosians without waiting to be asked; she felt, now, from her observations of Elizabeth Weir and Major Sheppard and several of the wizards entitled "Doctor," that the Tellurians never would ask recompense.

It was true enough that to set a fair price on what these second indwellers of the City of the Ancestors had done for her people the third might be enough to baffle master traders. But that did not invalidate the First Law of Trade, first among the copy-headings she had learned to write from: the purchase must be equal to the price, and the price to the purchase, else both giver and receiver are shamed and untold harm done to both.

She would not have her people known as cheaters and deceivers among all the worlds of the Ring; but she could not bear for them to dwindle upon the Urth-born largesse, and become no more than servants to vaunting Atlanteans, forgetting their houses and their inner tongue and their name to cling to such living as remained to them.

And so she was walking the tower, looking for some garden perhaps, some way in which her people might begin to contribute and to regain their pride even before the Urth-born finally opened the Ring, when she was nearly knocked over by Major Sheppard.

"Sorry about that," he greeted her, in the hasty contractions that were doubtless as much a legacy of his born-tongue as her phrasing echoed that of scarce-preserved Athoio. "Are your people settling in all right?"

"It is... very different," she settled on. "We are conscious of the debts we owe you, and are grateful."

Major Sheppard denied any debt, but she knew better. To ignore an imbalance was not to erase it from existence, as he should know; had she not heard Doctor McKay shouting about that very thing (as applied to the maker-of-fresh-water) the day before?

"Can I help you with something?" he asked.

"I wondered whether there were green growing things in the City. My people have some reputation as gardeners."

"So far, all we've found have been those very, very long-dead plants," he shrugged. He looked at her more directly. "How's Wex doing?"

"He, too, nearly ran me over this morning," she said fondly, "playing with his friends." As she had hoped against the elders' grim predictions: few of them had ever seen someone have the shellfish-sickness that badly and live. The Tellurians believed that it had been the boyish running about after the banquet that had made him take so much more ill than the others, and she had stopped three people wearing the yellow swathes of medicine's badge on their jackets to make sure that further activity would not cause a relapse.

"Kids," the Major smiled. "It's too bad we can't keep bouncing back that easily long enough to really appreciate it."

She had heard as much, many times, during her life, even from people her own age. Perhaps when she was his age, she too would feel herself slower to recover than she had been.

"I'm glad I ran into you," he went on as they walked down the hall. "There was something I've been wanting to ask you."

Teyla tilted her head slightly in his direction.

"The reasons we came to meet your people still hold. I'd like you -- " he paused, ever so slightly -- "to be among my conjoined."

Oh. And oh, this she had never thought of -- not even to hope that a union between her people and one of his, or his people and one of hers, might strengthen their alliance with a bond -- but of course. Of course.

The people are not the leader, but the leader is the people. This morning was a morning for copy-headings, it seemed. This, perhaps, she could do. This could bind her people to the Urth-born without guilt or shame. His use of the more poetic term might well mean that his people did not have Houses as hers had Houses; certainly few enough of the thousand worlds did; but his using it at all meant that it should be enough to satisfy the minds of her people.

Major Sheppard, from what she had seen and heard, held the same place among his people as Halling did among hers; the peril-commander, the voice to listen to in times of natural or Wraith disaster, when lives depended on obeying orders instantly. More, she owed him a personal debt as well as a popular one; he had tracked the Wraith through the Ring and come into a hive after his people and herself with them, and for that alone his name would have been sung around the fires of Athos.

And yet -- a House is more than two, the warning ran, reminding the young that they took or were taken on as a whole family, for better or for worse. "Who else is in it?"

"I was planning to ask Doctor McKay." What -- a new conjoining, then. Not a subsumation, not in any way. "And if you agree, I was hoping you'd help give me an idea of who' else you could share burdens with."

She had thought, once or twice, of taking the Major as a casual bedmate. Now she was glad that she had not; one cannot casually lie with a comrade, and a new House is delicate enough to weave without placing undue strain on one or more of its warps.

Doctor McKay. The wizard; the chief of the wizards of Atlantis, who managed them much as Shirrin Norriten had managed her House until her death three Athosian years before. Norriten still remembered her with reverence and terror, and Teyla had heard one of them telling her children that if they kept misbehaving, Great-Grandmother Shirrin would march back from the land of the dead and scold them herself.

He treated the Athosians much as they had treated strangers who came through their gate: without direct hostility, but every word and gesture betokening a way which it would be better for others not to infringe upon. He was ecstatic over arcane matters, depressed the exuberance of the other wizards with what appeared to be awful sarcasm, and loudly proclaimed the superiority of natural Wisdom to any other sort of Wisdom that might be. He looked on the hallways and chambers of the Silver City with the welling happiness of a boy in love. When Wex had dashed back into the slowly emptying gathering room in pursuit of Jinto and suddenly collapsed that first night, it had been Doctor McKay who half-gathered the boy into his arms, shouted for the medicine-people, and proceeded to harangue them in his own tongue to do what they obviously knew how to do better than he did.

Major Sheppard might be a peril-commander and second only to Elizabeth Weir, but Doctor McKay, if she interpreted the comments and body language of the Tellurian Atlanteans, was no less great. The Mother-earth, she thought, had sent few but master wizards; much as she was angered by the Genii proverb Who shall command a wizard, a woman, or the winter rain?, legend suggested the first part was accurate, and that anyone who could persuade so much as two adept wizards to wish to go in the direction he was traveling must be a force to be reckoned with.

Oh. No one who heard of this -- no one -- would think the Athosians to have sold themselves cheaply. No matter whom else they chose, this new House could not help but be ranked only behind Weir in Atlantis. Perhaps one of the tribe of medicine might do, or perhaps -- though she did not understand some of the whispers, she could see the disquiet that many of the militia held for their new commander -- another military man, to bind Major Sheppard more firmly into his new position. Perhaps even that one with the white smile flashing in the dark face, who had come into the Hive after him and together brought them nearly all out alive.

Even if her new familial duties meant that her people would have to choose a new leader from among themselves here in this new place, they would consider it fair, knowing that they had given their best in marriage to the two heroes who had invaded a Wraith Hive and the Chief Wizard of a debate of master wizards for a bride-price worthy of such men, and could claim kinship benefits thereof. The two of them were nearing the stairs now; she turned and nodded.

~*~


"I would be honored."

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[info]jade_1459

April 6 2007, 03:39:05 UTC 5 years ago

This was a great look into the possible and very probable cultural differences between Earth and Pegasus natives. I loved the way you wove through the use of language and spesific terms and phrases - giving them entirely new meanings when looked at from a different perspective.

I'm also intreguid by the idea of "Houses". Would you write more with this? I'd love to see the reactions of others when it finally came to light and how they delt with it. I'm assuming that with the cultural background you are giving Teyla not every marriage or House has an actively ... intimate pair?

Great story, and thanks for sharing it! *Really needs to find a better Teyla icon*

[info]saphanibaal

April 7 2007, 12:58:28 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you for your comments!

Language and terms that mean different things from one culture to another have been interests of mine ever since I first learned that "fish and chips" meant "fish and steak fries." ^_^

//I'm also intrigued by the idea of "Houses". Would you write more with this? I'd love to see the reactions of others when it finally came to light and how they dealt with it.//

This has one (mostly Ford-centric) sequel so far, "The Three Laws of Arthur C. Clarke (and corollaries thereof)," but in that one AR-1 still doesn't know.

//I'm assuming that with the cultural background you are giving Teyla not every marriage or House has an actively ... intimate pair?//

Not at any given time, not usually.

The Athosians are a post-apocalyptic society that deliberately chose not to be "civilized," and so I tend to think that the decision to go back to a semi-nomadic lifestyle would have also involved a great deal of social planning.

The Houses exist to raise the children. The people you wed or marry, short of Wraith or natural disaster, are probably in it for the duration; therefore, if you sleep with one of them, the one thing it can't be is casual. (Compare, say, dating a cousin or your brother-in-law's sister. No matter whether it works out or doesn't, you're going to be a part of each other's lives as long as you have relations in common, so...)

Given the relatively stable framework, my!Athosians wouldn't really care who you slept with, in or out of marriage, as long as:
1. You don't sleep with close blood relations. Teyla introduces herself as "Teyla Emmagan, daughter of Tagan" so that anyone Tagan sired will know she's off-limits and may be likely to speak up and let Teyla know *they're* off-limits.
2. It's not going to cause a problem for the rest of your House. Lovers, unless you wed them, come and go; your family is your family until the world falls into the sun.
3. You reproduce yourself at least once. If you are, unfortunately, sterile, you arrange for someone in your House to reproduce you for you, or adopt a child (ideally, a second child of a parent born in your House who married into a different one, although children found abandoned on other worlds are always welcome).

Other than that, genetic diversity is A Good Thing, which I think must be responsible for the reasons that most of the Athosians are so much less brown than Teyla. (I haven't decided yet whether she inherited her lovely skin color[s] from an offworld ancestor, or whether Ancestral Athosians were Teyla-colored and it's seen as rather a stroke of luck for their skin tones to come out in you, although I think I'm leaning toward the second option.)

Besides, in the show itself, if she gets into a relationship with any of her teammates now it'll be informed by the fact that they're already family, and have been for two or three years. (Which could make it either rockier or as natural as breathing.)

[info]eliyes

December 12 2007, 07:51:43 UTC 4 years ago Edited:  December 12 2007, 08:19:26 UTC

Other than that, genetic diversity is A Good Thing, which I think must be responsible for the reasons that most of the Athosians are so much less brown than Teyla.

This has been my reasoning for why so many of the cultures that actually trade with anyone look ethnically diverse -- but then I look at Chaya's planet, which was also diverse and shouldn't have been, being so isolated. Was she mucking with their DNA or what?

[info]missyvortexdv

April 6 2007, 18:31:50 UTC 5 years ago

A most interesting look from the other side of their beginnings. It's refreshing to seem cultural and linguistic barriers addressed in this way.

[info]saphanibaal

April 7 2007, 13:00:10 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

(Most of my œuvre on [info]sga_flashfic seems to be about cultural or linguistic matters one way or another.) ^_^

[info]ozsaur

April 7 2007, 02:44:26 UTC 5 years ago

Fascinating!

[info]saphanibaal

April 7 2007, 13:00:21 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]mhalachaiswords

April 7 2007, 05:36:58 UTC 5 years ago

There are so many amazing little tidbits in this story -- I find myself wanting to know more about Houses, and the ring language, and about the Athosians.

And that bit about McKay and Wex -- is that because Rodney lives in fear of an anaphylactic shock that he jumped to Wex's aid like that? It took me a second read to see that, but it feels like *Rodney*.

Much love.

[info]saphanibaal

April 7 2007, 13:28:20 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you so much for your comments.

//I find myself wanting to know more about Houses, and the ring language, and about the Athosians.//

I made up all sorts of useful data that's likely to be completely Jossed once the new season comes out. -_^ I did more with the ring language in "Silver," although that features a complete lack of Teyla, and now and then I write more about the Athosians because they're interesting; if Teyla's in them, they'll undoubtedly wind up here at some point.

//And that bit about McKay and Wex -- is that because Rodney lives in fear of an anaphylactic shock that he jumped to Wex's aid like that?//

Yes, absolutely.

I was going to do a big novelization/rewrite of the first week in Atlantis for my pet AU to show where it was the same and where it was different, and then it got stuck-stuck-stuck, but this, "Silver," and the first scene of "Far and Far from Land" were reasonably canon-compliant bits that I managed to rescue and spin into stories of their own.

In that, one of the upshots of the banquet would have been that while a third of the Athosians are mildly to violently allergic to shellfish (which they've gotten in trade from other worlds and which might have been transplanted to Athos), more than half of them are viciously allergic to peanuts, and they were first exposed in the dishes brought from Earth and set up at the banquet that first night.

(While first exposure would generally result in a period of feeling downright unwell, it usually doesn't bring on full anaphylactic shock, so most of them got checked out and then told never to eat peanut products again. The kids were running around like maniacs, so it hit the allergic one that much harder.) Rodney is intimately familiar with the symptoms of anaphylactic shock (whether because he remembers experiencing them or because he reads up to be sure he'll recognize them ASAP if he has them or both), so he reacted first. ^_^

[info]eliyes

December 12 2007, 06:52:33 UTC 4 years ago

This is absolutely brilliant and I love it whole-heartedly and without hesitation. It works especially well given how we've heard them call themselves a family. (Although with that said, how would Teyla have thought of it when John included Carson and Elizabeth in his list of people who are family?)

A couple of points of linguistic glee: I love that you used the word Tellurians, and that the group name for wizards is "a debate". :D

[info]saphanibaal

December 12 2007, 07:44:55 UTC 4 years ago

//This is absolutely brilliant and I love it whole-heartedly and without hesitation. It works especially well given how we've heard them call themselves a family.//

Thank you so much!

It's -- I have a weakness for other cultures and for unconventional families, and the sort of setup I postulated as a stable one in times of Wraith proves an excellent way to have one's cake and eat it too. ^_^

//(Although with that said, how would Teyla have thought of it when John included Carson and Elizabeth in his list of people who are family?)//

Well, she'd have included Charin during the latter's lifetime and very probably considers some of the Athosians to be closer relations than the fifth or sixth cousins they probably all are at the least anyway, so she has no objection to John listing his outHouse family as well as his inHouse one. (Besides, I'm fairly sure she'd have had no objection to AR-1 wedding Carson at least, and any qualms about Elizabeth marrying them would have been rooted in potential power-dynamic-issues rather than anything personal.) ^_^

//I love that you used the word Tellurians,//

Well, "terra" is the surface of the earth, or, sometimes, the stuff you plant the tulip bulbs in. ^_^ (Classics major, after all.)

//and that the group name for wizards is "a debate".//

^_^

Well, wizards. What else are they known for?

[info]eliyes

December 12 2007, 08:18:09 UTC 4 years ago

Well, wizards. What else are they known for?

Explosions! :D

[info]spike21

December 12 2007, 07:44:51 UTC 4 years ago

this was brilliant. How did I miss it? I'm looking forward to reading the just posted sequel!

[info]saphanibaal

December 12 2007, 15:02:49 UTC 4 years ago

...thank you. That means a lot, coming from you.

[info]ratcreature

December 12 2007, 12:40:21 UTC 4 years ago

This is a neat idea.

[info]saphanibaal

December 12 2007, 15:03:35 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you!

It seemed like too much fun *not* to play with, y'know?
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